Saturday, January 3, 2009

Would You.

Would you hold me, If I say good bye,

Would you look at me, If I close my eyes,

Would you touch my face, If I speak the truth,

Would you say all that I have to say, If I can't break the silence,

Would you see me, If I break down all the walls,

Would you whisper to me, If I start losing my sanity,

Would you hum a soft tune, If I stop breathing,

Would you be my angel, If I kneel to pray,

Would you save a seat for me, If I don't even mind standing,

Would you lead my way, If I forget where I am headed,

Would you hold me together, If I start to fall apart,

Would you kiss my eyes, If I let my eyes go adrift,

Would you give me strength, If I can't hold my head up,

Would you make me laugh, If I try my best not to,

Would you be all giggles, If I tickle your ears,

Would you let me caress your hair, If I need to feel my hands again,

Would you listen to my heart beating, If I can’t stand the distance anymore,

Would you let me sleep, If I need to wake up,

Would you shiver lightly, If I blow on your eyes,

Would you pull me back, If I am not really here,

Would you say nice to have had known you, If I say nice to have had known you.

8 comments:

clueless by chance said...

Heyyyy... good one there pal! Loved each one of the lines! :)

Jibi said...

Thanks. Kind reader.

Arun Ramkumar said...

tha top pal !
brilliant !!!
(me jealous)
would make an amazing song !

Amritorupa Kanjilal said...

No, i don't think I'll do any of these things Jivi. But I'll follow your blog, though. :D that much I'll do.

Jibi said...

@Arun
Jealous? Now you are being very kind mate.

Your poetry is some of the most original I have ever seen written. It feels great coming from you.

Song??? Come on, now you are just plain making fun of me.:)

Jibi said...

@LilGirl

Welcome... Honoured to have you here.

Thanks for adding me.

Anti-Dutt girl. :)

Amritorupa Kanjilal said...

jibi... long time no see dude... ice to have you back... read my other posts :)

Jita said...

no words to describe..its too good